Part 351 – Say My Name

Ambrose stood before Elsie.

His black eyes looked at her.

His hands reached for her.

His mouth opened and he said her name.

“Elsie.” His voice was warm and dark and alluring. Elsie wanted him to say it again.

And so he did. “Elsie.”

His hands traveled through her hair.


He kissed her throat. Her neck.

His kiss became a bite.




And she could do nothing to stop him.

So, she didn’t try.


Elsie shot up into a straight-backed sit and glanced around the room.

She was alone.

“It was just a dream. And nothing more. It didn’t mean anything. It didn’t.”

She rubbed her neck. Her fingers trailed across the marks that other vampire had left behind.

I don’t want him.

I don’t love him. I don’t like him. I don’t want to be anywhere near him again. I don’t!

She picked up the phone and selected Hildreth’s number.

“Hello. Good. You’re still awake. Nothing’s wrong. Nothing! I needed to hear your voice.”

He sounds so tired and worried.

“Really. It’s nothing. I want. I need you to say my name. I know it’s a weird request. I know you’re tired. I know Master Shinowa’s going to give you another thrashing tomorrow. I know you need to get your sleep. I know. I know! Just say it. Not like that. Not so full of concern. Say it like you love me.” Her posture slumped. “I’m not saying you don’t. Just say it. I need to hear it.”

She smiled. “Hildreth. Say it again. Say my name.”


I don’t understand any of this.  “Elsie. Elsie. Elsie.”

But oh. I wish she were here. “Elsie. Elsie. Elsie.”

If only I could reach through the phone and pull her here. “Elsie. Elsie. Elsie.”

If only that vampire hadn’t killed Mark Caten’s daughter. “Elsie. Elsie. Elsie.”

If only that vampire had never been born. “Elsie. I love you so much.”


“Hildreth.” Ambrose’s voice lightened into Hildreth’s voice.

“I love you.” Ambrose’s face transformed into Hildreth’s face.

“I love you.” Ambrose’s hands became Hildreth’s hands, reaching for her.

“I will always love you.” Hildreth’s hands touched her and embraced her.

And she felt peace. “Good night, Hildreth.”


He smiled. It doesn’t matter what or why that all just happened. “Good night, Elsie.”

4 thoughts on “Part 351 – Say My Name”

    1. Thank you so much!

      I really enjoy writing these quiet character moments.

      On a side note, I just realized today that my characters sure make a lot of use out of their cell phones. 😆 It makes me wonder how different this story would be if cell phones didn’t exist.

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      1. Yeah, my last two stories doesn’t include them. I think I’m uncomfortable with using cell phones in stories, lol. I’ll have to fix that in my next project, whatever that may be. 😉

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        1. I think there was some minimal cell phone use in Orchard House, if I’m remembering correctly, but obviously none in Time of Our Death. 😀

          Have I mentioned that I really enjoy working on this story? When I’m at work, I can’t wait to get home to write another chapter. Or two. Or, you know, maybe three. 😀 Even though I’m up to Part 390 (eep!), my characters still manage to surprise me with their words and actions. Sometimes they throw away my best plot machinations and just do their own thing. 😀

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